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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #165 on: January 18, 2019, 09:50:34 am »
Retiring the handle "RodneyStuckysnuts" because it's stupid. 
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #166 on: January 18, 2019, 10:00:26 am »
you know i can easily change your name so you can keep the same account
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #167 on: January 18, 2019, 02:33:06 pm »
Retiring the handle "RodneyStuckysnuts" because it's stupid.

Could not agree more
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #168 on: March 27, 2019, 10:57:02 am »
I expected a bigger laugh from Jim for "all u can eat buffet district" and "eaten out of business".  Did the setup confuse it ?  Thought about dropping a "Bam!" after "eaten out of business" and "they just call it a mac", but decided against it, regretting. 

Here comes the hate !
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #169 on: March 27, 2019, 12:03:58 pm »
I expected a bigger laugh from Jim for "all u can eat buffet district" and "eaten out of business".  Did the setup confuse it ?  Thought about dropping a "Bam!" after "eaten out of business"


you had some good lines, but this wasn't one of them
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #170 on: March 27, 2019, 03:40:28 pm »

you had some good lines, but this wasn't one of them

Is it clear from the setup that what has been "eaten out of business" is an all you can eat buffet ? 

And that I was in the "all you can eat buffet" district of Milwaukee ?

I'm thinking that the setup before "eaten out of business" is too long,  the context gets lost in the length, and it sounds like I'm talking about all of Milwaukee and not just the all you can eat buffet district.

Before calling I thought the front half of the call was the stronger half and was uncertain about the cheese smack.  Front half punchlines i think are good but I think  got diminished by the way I set them up.


Yeah I'm talking to myself, here comes the apathetic non reaction !





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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #171 on: March 28, 2019, 06:03:36 am »
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #172 on: March 28, 2019, 01:08:51 pm »
I can hear Jeff screaming here in H-town.  :popcorn
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #173 on: March 28, 2019, 07:44:49 pm »
Not bad, but that same bit probably gets you run during the Smackoff. 

Better than hearing that idiot Boatie attempt smack.  Congrats on surviving smacky choppa.
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #174 on: March 28, 2019, 07:53:44 pm »
Good job JeffinSouthfield. Way to bring some new fire to the Jungle.
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #175 on: March 28, 2019, 08:47:46 pm »
Not bad.  Congrats on surviving smacky choppa.

Wait what ?  Sorta warm fuzzys from Toolshed ?  This must be Fake Stucknut.  Tears of joy.  😂
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #176 on: March 28, 2019, 08:51:21 pm »
Good job JeffinSouthfield. Way to bring some new fire to the Jungle.
Top 5 in the smackoff is expected.  :koolaid

🎯   :koolaid
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #177 on: March 29, 2019, 08:12:04 am »
Wait what ?  Sorta warm fuzzys from Toolshed ?  This must be Fake Stucknut.  Tears of joy.  😂

I never said anything negative about your original call. 

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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #178 on: March 29, 2019, 12:53:18 pm »
I never said anything negative about your original call.

your more cerebral side has made me laugh buncha times 🍻

signed, my inner Tard.  🎃
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Re: Jeff in Southfield, dafuq
« Reply #179 on: March 29, 2019, 09:35:54 pm »
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