Author Topic: Smackoff 26 - Call 05 - Jeff in Southfield (Read 1251 times)

Steve in HTown · « **on:** June 19, 2020, 11:49:18 am »

Audio: https://www.stucknut.com/takebox/?id=2b88

Stucknut's own!

Steve in HTown · « **Reply #1 on:** June 19, 2020, 11:54:28 am »

funniest call so far

PopsGeez · « **Reply #2 on:** June 19, 2020, 11:54:42 am »

Shocked he wasn't ran after the diabetes joke

magic_uno · « **Reply #3 on:** June 19, 2020, 12:00:45 pm »

It sounded like a Hackoff call. Gotta hear it again. I was expecting LT.

BrianInSyracuse · « **Reply #4 on:** June 19, 2020, 03:58:44 pm »

Funniest call all day

Steve in HTown · « **Reply #5 on:** June 20, 2020, 01:22:21 pm »

Lots of good one liners

Funny Jim in Fall River impression

Jeff in Southfield · « **Reply #6 on:** June 22, 2020, 02:47:25 pm »

My delivery was too slow and subdued, some calls it hits a gear, this one it didn't, i give myself a bit of forgiveness because my phone was echoing back my voice and it threw me off a bit.

Over valued the Terrence bit, the punchlines too soft and that bit took a long time. Last fvcking time I think a clever idea overcomes long setups with soft punchlines. Loved the creativity of it, "who but Jeff would link Terrence missing to Tron" they would say while crowning me. Yeah, no. Think porno as a topic was a no no as well, may have cost me.

Not really sure if the Cablinasian jokes hit.

The Jim in Fall River was a better impression when I practiced it then how it came out, but I'm ok with it. The Tom Brady punchline wouldve hit better with my regular delivery.

All the jokes starting with Yoda i like a lot except the Brad impression tanked bad, was really unsure about that one, but part of me thought it was "stupid" funny and might hit. That joke is good IMO on paper, wouldve hit better with my regular delivery.

Thinking some calls may have gotten disqualified from placing due to taboo topics.

I don't think my call deserved to place regardless, delivery didn't hit that gear, Terrence bit lulled, Brad impression/joke tanked.

frankinhouston · « **Reply #7 on:** June 22, 2020, 07:22:32 pm »

Quote from: Jeff in Southfield on June 22, 2020, 02:47:25 pm

My delivery was too slow and subdued, some calls it hits a gear, this one it didn't, i give myself a bit of forgiveness because my phone was echoing back my voice and it threw me off a bit.

Over valued the Terrence bit, the punchlines too soft and that bit took a long time. Last fvcking time I think a clever idea overcomes long setups with soft punchlines. Loved the creativity of it, "who but Jeff would link Terrence missing to Tron" they would say while crowning me. Yeah, no. Think porno as a topic was a no no as well, may have cost me.

Not really sure if the Cablinasian jokes hit.

The Jim in Fall River was a better impression when I practiced it then how it came out, but I'm ok with it. The impression delays realizing the closing punchline tho, which is bad, but in a way good, because that line had the potential to be misunderstood as more than just a mouth kiss, which could've gotten me run, and it may have cost me placing if CBS didn't like it. Thought about telling that joke with my regular delivery so it would hit harder, but was worried I would get run. I needed to add the name Tom after "parenting" to keep that impression thru the punchline, it wavers on that last line, I was worried adding the name would gargle the word parenting.

All the jokes starting with Yoda i like a lot except the Brad impression tanked bad, was really unsure about that one, but part of me thought it was "stupid" funny and might hit.

Thinking some calls may have gotten disqualified from placing due to taboo topics.

I don't think my call deserved to place regardless, delivery didn't hit that gear, Terrence bit lulled, Brad impression/joke tanked.

your call was worth a rack. proud of you jeff.